i love your concept, maybe you could make her want more, aside that i like how you portraid your character to seem almost friendly

jack

I thought that the idea was very thought out. I think that you could've gone more in-depth when describing the "monster's" problems. I think that your monster should have more complicated problems than somebody saying no. Overall I thought that it would make a great story.

Graham

the idea I found most interesting was the idea of a monster that loves to eat pizza but one thing you should of said was instead of you saying it stop her from getting what ever she wants it should be what ever she needs.

cooper

its nice and simple

yosias

I like your scary hairy monster, and those wide-set eyes. And you've given her a great personality, I think those anger issues are going to be a lot of fun to animate/illustrate. I'm a little confused because I don't see a connection between the conflict you've set up (parents won't let her have all the pizza) and what they need to learn (to be themselves). In what ways is Te inauthentic? In what ways does she hide and not act like herself? What problems does that create?

April

Very cute character design! I'd love to learn more about her story!

Ciena

Very nice idea! I wonder if she ever gets the pizza?

Brogen

Tay is absolutely adorable!! Pizza is amazing and I really hope she gets all the pizza she wants. I'd love to see more of her character and see how she evolves!

Natalie