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I like Bob and the drawing. I find his story interesting and hope to see if he overcomes his weakness.

Crystal

I really like your idea of Bob being this confident person, despite them feeling lost and confused on the inside. I also loved the idea that as their confidence becomes their weakness as they are over-confident which prevents them from listening to others.

Harlee

I love this concept, I can relate to bob's struggle....I wonder how he will learn to listen in the story? I'l be curious to see what kind of obstacle you create for them

Tim

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