You did an amazing job describing the external and internal features! Awesome art as well.

Sam

super good nice

jerik

What I found most interesting about this character was how they are kind. This makes me wonder more about how the events that occur can change the character.

Mariana

i really liked the story line and the characters i think that it will be a promising short.

Kordelia

It looks great so far but it's a little long. The idea is so great and it will be good to create Ron going through levels

Maya

I like that there is multiple characters, I also like how they all have different views on things.

Seamus From Seamus Tries aka celebrity

I think the storyline is very good and I think that the external and internal features are good, well done!

Lily

I think it's great that you focused on multiple different characters, rather than one, and that they all build on one another. I'd like to hear more about the adventure that the team will embark on--it sounds really interesting!

Isabella

Wow you did multiple characters. I love their "wants" and this idea of getting out of the simulation. it makes me wonder how they will all interact in the story and what their "journey" will be like. can't wait for more

Brit