I think the idea is good, Although I wasn't able to understand much of the wants/needs part so maybe go more into depth on that part. Besides that its a great character.

Brandon

His eyes are cool

Brandon

That's a cool idea! I really liked how you carefully thought of a name for the character, and that it has so much deeper meaning. I wonder if he'll be able to overcome his difficulties with imagination. Looking forward to seeing where you go with this!

Maya

It’s really interesting how the name of your character has such a deep meaning. It makes me wonder how the character will evolve and develop.

Holden

I found it really interesting how you had lots of reasons for the name of your character. I think the name fits the description of your character well. It makes me wonder how the relationships of the character with other children would be affected by his wisdom and perception of reality.

Caroline

Apollo Character seems very interesting to say the least, I'm really interested what his Character traits (internal and external could be). Anyways I wonder how this story would connect with your What-if idea and how this Character would work for a younger audience. Anyways this submission was really good, Great job,

Bryce

The description is very detailed and really helps to visualize the character more. Great job.

Lily