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Great idea! I wonder how Archie will learn how to not have a self centered mindset?

Elle

You are such a good artist. Is he going to go throught character development and what will make that happen? What does he need the most. I am excited to see how you the chracter changes overtime.

Ashley

I really love this character and how his traits are able to impact his life and others around him. Is he going to go through character development that will be able to impact the story and resolution? I really love the drawing you did for this character because it helps to relate his physical attributes to his personality.

Nalani

Great job! How does he want to help though? What does he describe as a "Life Of Luxury"? How does he think he will get rewarded for his help?

Ethan

How does he want to help the world? How will he learn to care more about others than just himself? Did something make him self centered? What's his backstory? Other than these things he sounds like an interesting character with a good problem to solve, that being his self centered mindset.

Aidan

Liked the design! The wild red hair and gold tooth help to sell that he is reckless. His sunglasses make me wonder what his eyes look like and if he will be really handsome in addition to being a wild card. Would love to see how the character interacts with the story's world. But would also like to know what other characters he will interact with (potential love interest, interesting villain, a comedic team of adventures?)

Audrey

Archie sounds like he's going to be a complex Character. His Character reminds me of Aladdin's Character arc if you want to really develop is Character in a professional way. I wonder the what if you chose to go along with this Character and what type of antics he will get up to. Anyways the Character design is really good.

Bryce

The character design is so cool and I love that it tells part of his story and his personality a bit. I wonder how his character will evolve and change.

Natalie

I love this idea and character. The drawing is really good too and does a good job of picturing him from what you said.

Lily

1. the idea I found most intering was that archie wants to help humanity but fails because of his self centered mindset
2. this makes me wonder more about how he acts because these ideas/traits seem as though they contradict

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