I love the struggle with person against society, I think that this has amazing potential and could be a very inspirational short. I think that you could make it a specific snake or make your own!! I hope this character overcomes the obstacles and is at peace with themselves.

parker

i like the drawing. its great. but i want to hear more about why they want to be a protector

Maddie

I really like how you said it in the perspective of the snake. Why is its brother venomous but there not? Aren't they the both the same kind of snake?

Elle

Great story.
Good drawing.
Love snakes!

Kareem

The idea is nice, but maybe the snake's outer image could be shown more, but the art is nice

Ziyad

YESSS THE SUPERPOWER SNAKES !!!! I LOVE THIS SO MUCH

Clara

This sounds awesome and, somewhat scary, also it sounds like an unpopular kid wanting to be popular.

Corbin

What I found most interesting about this character was how much information you gave, it makes me wonder more about how you will keep us engaged during the story and making it interesting?

Dylan

I like how you give it a story...sounds like a Disney movie your going pro

ahmaree

what if it had babies?

SG

i like this a lot. i loved how u picked a snake. and also if the snake is so tiny will it grow and get more powerful?

Aurelija

I like that its a very unique snake unlike the other snakes.

Kira

What I found most interesting about this character was they lived in a abounded house. It makes me wonder more about how even snakes face discrimination.
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Mariana

I really love this character! The way you drew them and made their personality makes me love them already! Although I do wonder about how she'd react if she was accepted into the protectors. Would she teach others not to underestimate her?

Sara

I really enjoyed the story I feel like I can somewhat relate to twilight, it makes me wonder what happens if twilight went for what she really wants to be or what happens when she breaks the rules?

Isa

Awww your snake is adorable. Great drawing, delivery and use of music. I like the friend's name 'ocean'. I wonder what the main conflict in your story will be? Will they make it back to the forest? or continue to defend their home? will their super power somehow make them loved by normal snakes?

Brit