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Good description of inside and outside Andrew and a character seeking revenge and amazing plot. but I wonder where do the robots come from? how will he stop them? who will get revenge on?

Adrian

Great description of Andrew's external & internal characteristics and a very clear want and obstacle. Your video cutoff so I'm not sure what stops Andrew, but it makes me wonder: 1) what is the robot's purpose, 2) who controls the robot, and 3) does this obstacle cause Andrew to re-evaluate his want and change?

Nice work, definitely a unique character...so sad that it got cut off! please check your upload next time for submitting it. I wonder what he needs to learn?? I'm so curious. But this idea of avenging this brothers death from killer robots, where did the robots come from?

Brit

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