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really nice drawings it has a lot of potential how did you even make that ths is very amazing everything is great i would not change anything
antonio
Wow, you have a very clear and wonderful script for your story. I love that you have fleshed out Iris's different ages and what she is like for each of them. It makes me wonder who the "You" character is? I'm fascinated by your title: loverstwoenemies, and if that means that these two characters are enemies turned lovers or vice versa or what the relationship is between Iris and 'You' and what Iris's obstacle and turning point will be and what she will learn. Excellent work on your teaser!
PD
this is above and beyond....my fav line was "bro this is healthy", I look forward to hearing the summary of your story in future weeks as there are so many characters to learn. Your comedic timing is clearly jumping out of the video, i can't wait for the final submission. will you have voices in it?
TIm
The art work was really well done, and the whole thing was well put together. Great job!
Lexi
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