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I love the idea of giving a ghost the appearance of a teenager with Victorian style clothes that is quiet unique. Some things you could ask yourself to create a better story is.... how does the ghost actually become friends with the ghost hunter? Do they do things together like do they clean the mansion together? How else could the business man be scared off or dealt with?
Gabriel
I like the design of the character. The obstacle,needs and the story sounds very interesting. Amazing work :)
SG
This idea is great! It reminds me of a mash up of Casper and Mouse Hunt. Really well thought out!
Lexi
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Blair Everly
My character is a ghost who becomes friends with a ghost hunter
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T.E.A.M (The Extra Awesome Moths) I think
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