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Great descriptions of your character and his world. What I find most interesting about your character is even though his basic needs aren't being met considering he has no shelter, he is still able to find happiness from his friendships. I'm curious to learn more about your character's journey and what causes him to recognize what brings him happiness. Nice work!

Nice work. what I found most interesting about this character is his depression...is it the cause or result of his homelessness. I love the theme of this story (friends = family) I really hope to see this developed more in the next week.

Tim

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