I love your character a lot and i love the scenario you put him in. Maybe touch more on the character itself and what he does and stuff but other than that i really like the concept and the scenario you put him in, its really intresting

samantha

I like the layout, I feel like you could a lil Moore deali on the people and not all of them to be sicks. I like the characteristics.

mia

I thought the plot could go in many different directions. Maybe you could have added more detail to the drawings and added color. Over all I really like the plot and thought it seems fun.

Grace

I think your idea of combining an apocalypse with with a character lacking self-confidence is an interesting idea. I didn't see anything about what Johnny is like on the inside. What's some of his other personality traits besides low self-esteem? Is he funny or serious? Is he quiet and shy or outgoing and loud? Is he something else? I think once you expand on this, you'll have a really interest character!

Kaitlyn

I like the idea but i think it could use some more thought into it but I think you did to good job overal

Jacob

I like the idea but i think it could use some more thought into it but I think you did to good job overal

Jacob

I like the idea but i think it could use some more thought into it but I think you did to good job overal

Jacob

I liked how you told us everything about the character
Something I would change it adding some color and sketching first with pencil then draw it over it so it could look much better
But everything looked good.

Victoria

Really cool story
Add color
how did that all start
this is something i would watch

Diego

I love the idea, I appreciated the humor of the zombies and this could make the character a more likable and unique character. having a clear goal for the character and the obstacles he has to face is also very good and I think it will put a good message through.

Hunter

What I found most interesting about this character is that he wants popularity........while being in a zombie apocalypse. It's a very unique idea and there's a lot that can be done with that. It makes me wonder more about what you meant by popularity? Does he want to be popular for stopping the apocalypse/killing the most zombies, or does he just want to be popular in general? It makes me wonder more if he's scared of the zombie apocalypse stopping him from achieving popularity, or just something else.

Zinedine

I like how you did the befining and how you made it clear how you said how the carachter was feeling.

Julieanne

I hope Johnny wins the apocalypse and becomes popular.

Emma

I hope in the end Johny wins the apocalypse and becomes popular. Even though Johny isn't confident hopefully he goes through character development and becomes confident.

Emma

Super good submission. Zombies and self doubt...what could possibly go wrong?? :) - What i found most interesting is this idea that "confidence takes time", that's pretty deep. I think your story has a chance to be both funny , quirky and also deliver a strong message in the end. can't wait

Brit