I like your concept and how people can relate to the characters feelings.

nora

vary good i would like to see more excitement but other then that good i want to know more about why she wants that.

alyssa

I really like this character and I like how you added what kind of environment they live in. It makes me wonder about what made this world ruined and was it ruined before she was even alive? Were they always anxious and suspicious? If not what caused them to act this way?

Emily Jane

I love them! What an accurate, fleshed-out depiction of someone living in a broken society. You particularly piqued my interest by mentioning this character's dystopian world. What is their environment like? Is their government strict and oppressive or wild and chaotic? Why are they afraid of the dark? Will they find friends and happiness eventually?

Dylan

I really like how you constructed the inside of the character and their fear since everyone has fear somewhere. It makes me wonder more about how they're going to find out that there are people they can relate to. Also, you can also show how other people treat them.

Chloe