i like your character, maybe you could give more external traits? aside that i do like what you already have

jack

i really like the idea of the topic. i think that you could improve by not explaining a little more eon the problem. i also like the digital drawing and the sketch.

jenelle

1. I love how detailed you are about your character. Rachel seems like a real person that I would know, and interact with.
2. I am very curious to find out what issue Rachel's people are facing, and how her family's past connects to it.

Kiana

"What I found most interesting about this character was the way she feals obout her self
"It makes me wonder more about what problems with her family.

Natalie H

what i found most interesting was that in your picture it looks like she haves plants growing on here this makes me wonder if this is why she isent considered normal

Michael

I absolutely love your character and all the outfits! The only thing is that you can probably make your plot a bit more descriptive.

Mira

Really liked the character’s outfit seems to have a nice earthy aesthetic! A little confused about how the character's personality will fit into the story. But overall, the design seems to be in a good place. If you want it might help to look at how body shape or clothing can change the silhouette as it will help Rachel stand out when placed next to other characters.

Audrey