What I found most interesting about this character was how she wants love from her family. Does she not already have that? Also, it makes me wonder why is music not allowed?

Noah

What I found most interesting about this character was that she was Hawaiian. It makes me wonder more about how she would do if she made her own music for herself if she was braver.

Rayden

I like that your character has elf doubts, because it makes it more believable. What I wondered was, how old is this character?

Alana

she is a very pretty person. but does she have experience with sound or music?

michayla

I like your character but why does music make her happy and why is music not allowed?

Mira

Very clear and easy to understand and it's a great idea she wants to break the rules but doesn't know how to do it yet.

Maya

I like how you introduce the character, and I like how you explain the problem.

Jasmine

I think you have some good internal features but you should add more external features

Lily

the only thing that I thought that you could do better was to speak a little louder but other then that it was good and creative

max

I really like your story already one thing I would say to add is maybe some of her friends or family into the story, what type of music is she into and why does music make her happy?

Isa