im only 10 seconds in and i love how you played your character! what is her want? and i like how you gave her a voice and made a showcase feel like a conversation!

jack

I love the fact that it's the character speaking, and the different character poses. I think the story could be really interesting, and I'm really curious about your world building.

Eve

1. What I found most interesting about this character was they're cheery nature, and how outgoing they are. They seem like a person that I would want to be friends with.
2. This makes me wonder how the Wren (or Ren) character interacts with them because from what you're character describes, it seems like they have very different personalities from each others.

Kiana

I really like your character and the amount of detail put in to it!

Noah

I love the illustration you made for this story concept, I wonder how the story will play out

Patricia

I love how the personality and overall look of your character fits the the meaning of their name. The colors used are really nice and just looks really neat.

Dorison

this character’s personality is communicated so well, it makes nuri feel like a very real person. the way they explained their story from their perspective gives it a lot of depth. i wonder what the backstory of nuri’s family and community is, and i hope i get to find out!

elliot

Really liked the voice acting on the character! Since your character has no gender will the love interest also have no gender because they both represent humans in element form? How do you plan to design the water and fire tribes. Adding cultural influences from different areas of the world could really improve the world building and designs for these people. Since it sounds like the two nations are nomadic I believe it could help to look at mongolian fashion and architecture (more specifically things like yurts) as taking inspiration from real world elements can drastically improve a story.

Audrey

Very well illustrated...I really liked how you voiced over your creation!!

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Ayush

Nuri looks so cute! Their personality seems really great. This makes me wonder if Nuri and Ren will fall in love? If they do, how would they interact? If not, how would their interactions be anyways? What would happen if they touched? Does Nuri burn stuff they touch? Do people see them as an outcast and dangerous?

Kendall

I love love love this so much!! Nuri seems awesome and I hope things do go well with the Ren!! I love the story behind this character and how much personality they have too. It leaves me wanting to see more and I'm very curious about Ren now too. Amazing!!!!

Natalie

This is amazing! The picture is so good and the description definitely matched it. Sounds like a great movie!

Lily