I really liked how to the point everything was, but the bed-sheet ghost thing was a little confusing. Overall though, I really liked how many traits he has, good and bad (as far as I can tell that can be a hard thing to get right).

Phoenix

I like the characteristics

Emma

I like the concept! It makes me wonder how the ghost will play out.

Spencer

I like your character's attitude, because it gives him a good flaw. What was the what if part?

Alana

Great video! It makes me wonder how does the ghost in the pic, plays into the short?

Jack

Great video! It makes me wonder how does the ghost in the pic, plays into the short?

Jack

It looks great so far but the "what if" part wasn't clear next time put it in the title and try to talk louder it's kinda hard to hear. I love the idea though

Maya

I like that some people can relate with his main goal to have a happy family. Why does he give attitude though? Has his parents tried to help him stop being rude? Has he had a serious talk with his parents?

Emily