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I really love your design, as well as your entire concept. Your drawing of Amelia really shows how she is a shy person and wanting to overcome her fears. I wonder if there will be someone out there that believes and listens to her, or can even see animals too.
Harlee
I love the idea it is so cool she seems to care so much about the animals and it seems as if she really wants to get over her fears and social awkwardness. My questions is why do you think she had these anxieties is it beacuse she can see these animals and others cannot ? Over all the idea is really there and I love it.
Hadarya
I like her design, it definitely conveys a shy and timid girl, but I am curious as to why people think she is crazy. Is she spacey? Does she believe in a lot of things commonly accepted to be fake? Or is it just because she believes animals are real? I would be careful to flesh her hobbies and interests out more, as well as other aspects of her personality besides shyness and introversion, to make sure that she doesn't become a stereotype, but other than that I think she definitely has the potential to be a great character, especially considering what (from what I gathered from this video) your plot is going to be based around!
Katie
Love it. The concept is unique and I wonder how she came to learn animals were real in the first place. I wonder how she will "prove" this to others?
Brit
What I found most interesting about this character was that they know animals exist when nobody else does.
It makes me wonder more about how that is. Were they told in a dream? Can she see them?
Bentley
I love your idea, and I like that your character has flaws, because it gives the character a lot of dimension and depth. What is something that your character can learn? Could she maybe come to an understanding that she doesn't need other people to believe her? it makes me wonder if the other characters in your story can see animals after they do a task or take a serum?
Alana
I really like the values of your character. It creates a stronger connection, and helps with upcoming story line. ᕕ( ᐛ )ᕗ
Sierra
It makes me wonder about how the charcter will change
Grey
I love the character it is very nice and I love the drawing also I love the girls goal.
Estrella
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What if only one person could see animals
What if only one girl, Amelia, could see animals and the rest of the world couldn't?