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Chip Humphrey sounds like such a sweet character! I like how Chip Humphrey has to learn a balance like that, I wonder what he will have to encounter to learn he needs that balance?

Cayden

I like the idea of a potato spy, it seems pretty funny with the killer bean-like character. It gives me a few other ideas about like what does the rest of the world look like? What is the goal of humphrey? Other than the unclear conflict, this idea looks interesting to put into a story.

Tristan

while the idea sounds fun,its a potato in a suit who is a spy! id pay to see a 90 minute feature film starring chip! but he looks punchable,i want to punch him in his smug little face

connor

I like the idea of a potato in a suit. The inner feelings really add emotion to the character. What part of this story has to do with being a spy? will this lead to difference approaches to other characters? The idea is very creative.

Brandon

Your character of a potato in a suit AND with the special position of a spy really triggers imagination! Why is the character being a spy? Is it because it needs to, or only because it wants to?

HiuLam

very cute/funny i love the person very great idea

alex

what i found most interesting is that he wants to make friend. it makes me wonder more about if he would make friend and how do the people look like in the story.

peter

I love how the drawing really shows your character, and how well you were able to describe it.

Holden

I like the exotic features... (him being a spy as a potato). I also love how you bring emotions into it, how he hides his pain over a smile.

Kai

The thing that I found the most interesting about your character was how they needed to interact with others but he had trouble because they saw him as annoying and nothing more than that. That made me think about how the other people that he is trying to talk to might be living and why no one wants to be friends with him

David

What I found most interesting was the idea of having a Potato spy (great design by the way) and have him contain all of these real human emotions. It makes me wonder what great stories you can tell of him trying to get friends while also doing very dangerous spy missions.

Jack

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Chip Humphrey

He is a potato. He wears a suit. He is a spy. He is the one and only CHIPPPPP HUMPHREYYYYY!!!

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