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What I found most interesting about this character was that he was ambitious. It makes me wonder more about what exactly his ambitions are.

Sean

I like all your descriptions of Nick, is physical & emotional features, including his challenges. This makes me wonder about if there is a conflict that happens in Nick's story, that could affect how he feels inside. I really like the internal features that you choose.

Elijah

I like all the inside features but where does the story take place?

Mira

what i found most interesting is why he scared in the inside. it makes me wounder dose he stay how he is

peter


I like how many internal things you have on nick.

jasmine

I like how many internal things you have but maybe you should add more external things to make your character more descriptive.

Kaelyn

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