What I found most interesting about this character was his hat. It makes me wonder more about why he wears it.

Sean

I like the sketch, the video cut off halfway through, and I think the story has potential.

Noah

Looks good, very interesting.

Rosy

I like the concept of the donkey liking cake.
I think that the drawing of the donkey could maybe have more details.

Yusuf

eciN drawing

Lorenzo

What I found most interesting about this character is his love for cake, it makes me wonder more about how that will be relavent in your story plot?

Dylan

I like the story I would like to know why they are selfish and what happens? keep up the good work.

Isa Lozada

next time try not to mix up you words because instead of donkey you said doggy it sounds like and next time you record make sure you get out everything you wanted to say because you missed a little bit it sounds like and you still had 13 secounds still but good job.

Rowin

looks great and has potential

javier