I like everything about the character. From his looks all the way to his personality.

Naleo

I really like this idea and art work its a very great story and a very great plot and really like the artwork.

Adrian

What I found most interesting about this character was the ability to summon creatures from constellations. This is a very clever and unique idea, and I think there is a lot of potential. It seems that you have your story planned out with strengths, goals, and weaknesses, and I'm excited to see how it turns out! Great artwork as well!

Will

I love your character already! The art is beautiful and he's an overall well made character. He has personality, dreams, and weaknesses. Although I am very curious to find out how he learns patience.

Sara

The interesting thing about this is that summoning creatures from constellations would be awesome!!

Estrella

I adore this illustration. I'm excited to see how the story unfolds.

Nyela

Really loved the story idea! Sounds like it'll be fun researching all sorts of different constellations. Since his goal is to become the first sorcerer to summon the hydra, I think It would really improve the character design to add more hydra-like elements. For example, his hair could be really wild like tentacles or entangling hydra heads. Also since the story seems to slightly revolve around greek mythology with mentions of the hydra and constellations it could really help the world-building and character designs to research greek culture and fashion. If this is taking place in a more modern setting researching old greek ruins could still be interesting. Overall, a great story can't wait to see the final project but try to experiment with greek elements and potentially making characters look like their spirit constellation.

Audrey

This is a very interesting character you have introduced. I really liked the illustration, and all the characteristic traits he has. A very original and interesting character arc.
Im really looking forward for this story to unfold.

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Ayush

I like the idea of constellations being a superpower, that is concept that has never been done before. I'm really interested in how his story will unfold and how it will relate to the what if you chose. Overall this character is simplistic but interesting.

Bryce

I think this idea is creative and this will be a really interesting story! What happens when the constellations are summoned? Does something else happen? Why does he want to summon the most complicated constellation? Does he seek fame or will he be considered talented if he can summon the hydra? How will he figure out how to summon it? Once he overcomes his problems, will he then be able to summon it?

Kendall