I like how you stated all of the things he literally needs; not just morally. What is his conflict going to be? Will he change; and how? I like your drawing and how you depicted his physicality.

Sam

I really like how you put a lot of personality into your character and I like how you show that he is muscular in the drawing.

Hamza

What I found most interesting about this character was how he can be happy in his situation.
It makes me wonder more about how he became homeless. Was he born into homelessness? Did something bad happen to him?

Bentley

i liked the concept, it makes me wonder if he will get better.

jillian

I like the idea that this character can reflect some real problems in our world. You could develop his personality inside more, for example, is he sensitive and also kind to others, or is he looking for revenge on something?

Chloe