I liked the name of your puffins, very cute! can you explain on how he goes from falling off a cliff to helping people. is he helping people or puffins?

Jennie

Cool character and great drawing! It was really cool how you didn't stick exactly the outline but told us about the qualities of the characters through a story! It makes me wonder what the birds thought process was after falling off the cliff that made it want to help people, and what the bird's story will be!

Raphael

Great character! I wonder what is his obstacle in the story?

Jack

What I found most interesting about this character was the fact that she was learning how to fly. It makes me wonder why she wants to help people after she fell.

Taylor

Seems like a interesting story

jesse

What I found most interesting was that Latte decided that she wanted to help people after falling off of a cliff. It makes me wonder why this would happen. Did they realize they wanted to help people after they saw they needed help after the experience, or something else?

Parker

1. the idea I found most interesting was that after her fall latte realizes she wants to help people
2. this made me wonder more about the connection of falling to then wanting to help others

Bella