I think the character is really great, but I think you could have clarified the story. What's your what if question? Other than that, I think you did a really good job!

Kaitlyn

Good character, well thought out. only issue is you started repeating yourself at the end. Also what is the What If?

Tristan

cool character nice good job

jerik

I love the story and idea of this but the "what if" question is not clear. Its supposed to be based off that and maybe put the what if question in the title so we can understand your story more

Maya

Awesome character but where is the story taking place and how did Elliot meet Clemintine?

Mira

I like this story, what I was wondering is how he was going to share that making mistakes are ok.

Leah

i love this story i cant wait to see the final one

alyssa

I wonder are him being happy and sad all the time or are those just some moments.

Lily

Nice character design! I like the ideas of your character, but I wonder if the story could be more developed to help stop my confusion on it.

Brogen