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Great idea! I wonder how John and Jon will interact will each othe?

Elle

What I found most interesting was John’s unwillingness to take joy from life. It makes me wonder how he could overcome that attitude. Would Jon be involved in this?

Parker

What I found interesting was how that person could be an actual person and then how he would be able to cope with and use his alter ego. It made me think about what he might do with his alter ego

David

Interesting way to bring one character together with extremely different personalities. I am curious what makes each personality come to life, how and if the pirate persona will be portrayed, and if he will overcome his struggles?

Sarah

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