I like the depth in description of your character. I think you should add more to the story like why hes relevant and why he's your main character. What is the conflict, rising action, and resolution? I really like your sketching style.

Sam

I really liked that you described him very well. And I thought maybe you could have what he is most afraid of and gone into depth about the plot. But over all I liked that you used color.

Grace

I really liked that you described him very well. And I thought maybe you could have what he is most afraid of and gone into depth about the plot. But over all I liked that you used color.

Grace

I like the personality that you made but i feel that you could have gone into more detail about the characters settings. I like the drawing of the character because i feel that it looks very well. I feel like you could give the character a name to add some personal connection to your character and make them feel more alive.

Tate

what if found intresting was your explaing of the character some room for improvment would be your art drawing you should of made something more better but its still good

antonio

I like the information you have already created about the character. But I was wondering if thereʻs is some deeper information about your character that you could include that could make it more personal when people try to relate to the character. Also, would your character have a name, or would they remain nameless for the purpose of the reel?

Nalani

What I found most interesting about this character was, that he seems like a very big jerk. It makes me wonder more about why he is popular if he acts like that?

Dylan

What i found interesting about this character was that he was stubborn but popular it makes me wonder more about what if his friends wanted to go do something dangerous and he didnt want too go so they whould hate him for not going

Rayden

What i found interesting about this character was that he was stubborn but popular it makes me wonder more about what if his friends wanted to go do something dangerous and he didnt want too go so they whould hate him for not going

Rayden

What i found interesting about this character was that he was stubborn but popular it makes me wonder more about what if his friends wanted to go do something dangerous and he didnt want too go so they whould hate him for not going

Rayden

Good character has lots of detail.

Remy

Good character has lots of detail.

Remy

Good character has lots of detail.

Remy

This is good character development! Consider how your character's internal and external traits will contribute to the storyline and perhaps think about what your character wants and needs and what obstacles they will have to deal with.

Rio

What I found most interesting about this character was the internal features because he sounds like a bully. I wonder what change he will have if he will still be a bully or not.

Taylor