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i really like the animations. i also think it could have been okay without the intro and outro. i also like that the character is different than some others i have seen.
jenelle
I really like how detailed the drawings of the characters are, but is there a reason why the first character is so bad at communicating? Also, is there a reason why the second character looks and dresses the way she does. I think the personality of the first one is really interesting and could help make a really good story
Farah
Great video collage!
Drawings are amazing.
Kareem
I really love the art in both of these pictures, I do think that if the second one is supposed to be scary you should change the design a little cause it just looks like a normal person who wears black. I also really like the storys for them.
Noah
I really enjoyed the appearance of the first character and I think the personality is interesting. I really want to see the shenanigans that happen when the character tries to make a friend!
Tyler
I really loved the picture at the bottom with Kyro at the bottom!
It makes me wonder who raised him and who Mayoko is to him.
Sam
Beautiful drawings. I found this character to be very believable and relatable. I'd love to see her drawings. It makes me wonder how the drawings will be used in the story and where they might take her. I look forward to see how this develops.
brit
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Kyro & Mayoko
Character sheet for Kyro and profile for Mayoko