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Your drawings are very good but add more detail to your ideas.

Emma

its hard to hear you guys and most of your sentences were cut off try using photos next time instead of a live video!

Xen

Nice drawing Speak louder next time please

Grey

love the art and the style of it. is there a ways that the dog and cat can actually switch lives.. by adding color it could add a lot. love how creative.

kailah mack

The art is amazing, I think the ideas are great but the audio is hard to hear and the videos cut out while the person is still talking, its mainly just production issues but the What If's are amazing.

Brandon

I like the what if a dog wanted to be a cat one, and how it sort of reflects real life transgender stuff and our society right now. You could have added a little blip about why the dog wants to be the cat and some reasoning. Also could have said whether it was the same for the cat. And finally I love the art in this.

Noah

I really loved all of your drawing and they were really clear. I think you could speak up a little and maybe add on a little to you what if questions. I could not quite here the end of the second question. Other than that I really loved all of your pictures and ideas.

Hadarya

I think the drawings are really good, have you thought about the problem in the story? I also think the ideas are very creative.

Johnny

The audio is kinda quiet and hard to hear. the art would be a lot better in my opinion if it was just cleaned up a bit. I like the ideas though.

Hunter

I like the first idea but i think that you could come up with a better concept. I liked your drawing

Jacob

I like the first idea & I liked your drawing

Jacob

I like the first idea but i think that you could come up with a better concept. I liked your drawing

Jacob

I like the first idea the most. I liked your drawing

Jacob

I quite like the drawings, the art style you have here is jammed with creativity! However, you do speak a bit softly and quietly, making it a bit hard to make out what you say, necessitating multiple listens to it. Additionally, the second what if gets cut off, so we don't hear the most important part of the question. These questions do see interesting, so you just need to fix some light problems and inconveniences with presentation, and you'll be good!

Christian

nice drawings
Speak louder
Add color
Spend more time on drawings
Nice

Diego

It's a little hard to hear, but the third idea is great, I also love the drawings, but the second ones audio got cut short.

Ziyad

Nice detailed drawing
how ever you should add some color so it could stand out
and something is to talk a little louder you did great but it was hard to hear
Nice job

Victoria

I like the idea of the monster and the drawing is on point I love it! Maybe next time check your videos and make sure they aren't getting cut off, because the video talking about the vampire got cut off

samantha

the third one was the only one i found interesting,the second could've been good if it wasnt cut short

connor

I really like the idea of the dog wanting to be a cat, i think it's very creative and I really love the drawing, it looks like you put so much effort into it. I noticed that the cat is looking meanly at the dog so was the cats wished fulfilled? Did they already swap and maybe the cat didn't like it?

samantha

Your drawings were great! Maybe add more detail for the photos.

Emma

I really like this. Very good idea!!

Rosy

I liked the one with the monster because it was original

Cam

I liked the one with the monster because it was original

Cam

I liked the one with the monster because it was original

Cam

The idea I found most interesting was the monster one. It was really original and I think it would make a great plot.

Finnley

I really like the idea about the monster. It sorta breaks the stereotype of monsters being scary and not scared of stuff. I love it!

Braylon

I love you ideas and art style! I think any of your ideas would turn out be amazing. I really like the first one with the dog wanting to be a cat. It looks like the cat doesn’t like the dog. Is the dog’s wish fulfilled? Do the dog and the cat swap bodies? That could be fun and play into the fact that the cat doesn’t look pleased. Anyways I think you did a great job :) Keep up the good work!

Bridget

I liked the first one the most, made me wonder what the rest of the cats and dogs would do, like trans people. I couldn't tell what you said about the vampire, I think it cut out. If there's anything you can do to improve the audio, it would make it a thousand times easier to watch. Your ideas are going outside of what you'd typically expect things to be like, and I love it.

Kiwi

monster terrified by its shadow was the most interesting

Corbin

Funny ideas, short and sweet.

Corbin

Grow: I liked how detailed and refined your drawings look.
Grow: Next time, you should try not to cut off your audio recordings so shortly, as we didn’t fully know what you were going to say for your second idea.

Solomon

I loved the idea about the dog! It would be pretty fun (and funny) to see a dog trying to fit in amongst the cats. It makes me think more about accepting other people and cultures because... ya know... dogs and cats. (Maybe fix the vampire thing though, it kinda got cut off)

Richie

I loved the idea about the dog! It would be pretty fun (and funny) to see a dog trying to fit in amongst the cats. It makes me think more about accepting other people and cultures because... ya know... dogs and cats.

Richie

the found the monster one really interesting

jelvin

Ohhh cute!!! It's always fun having characters with more or less impossible aspirations—and the monster being afraid of its own shadow is just some good comedy. As for the middle, I love it, but it gets cut off, so I have no clue what you said—what about the vampire is unique? Based off of the picture alone, I'm gonna assume maybe they're not allergic to the sun? Then, as for the dog wanting to be a cat, how do they accomplish this? And, for the monster, is it unaware of its own appearance? Like, would they be scared if they ran into a mirror as well? Or, do they just not understand shadows?

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