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I really like both your first and second ideas, but especially the second! It seems like a really cool magic system and I can't wait to see where this goes!
Katie
I found the constellation idea the most interesting, it is so cool!! Just imagining the visual possibilities is getting me super exciting, good on ya. I'm wondering about whether what the story behind the magic is, like what is the context: is this a lost art of magic? Is it like a societal, cultural thing? Idk, just a lot of possibility, and so excited to see what'll come of it.
Maile
The second and third ideas are really interesting to me because they could make a large impact on humanity as we know it. In the second there are many questions I could ask. To what extent could we make these animals? Would different people have different aptitude to different species? What are the limits to these constellations? As for the third, how would the tree affect us? Would it be a treasure bearing limited fruits? Would it be owned by a secret society? What is the history behind it? All of these ideas seem very interesting and especially interesting with the great visuals.
Tristan
I like that your ideas are very original, and your illustrations are great! i like the constellations one because there is a lot of possibility and millions of stars so you could have anything you wanted. Not many people know the constellations so people could learn them through your movie. Cool Ideas?
Jennie
All three are fantastic ideas and any could be developed into full blown stories. Beautiful illustrations too. I wonder about each concept so its hard to choose. Why is the girl born with wings and how does she live in the world being the only one? Do they grant her special powers and how is she excepted by those around her? What are the rules of your world where constellations come to life? Does everyone have that ability and do they use it for good or evil? And the granting wishes tree: who would be the character in your story, the tree or a person or creature? Would everyone know about this tree? And would strings be attached to those who get the wishes or what journey would the go on and learn from when getting their wish? So cool!
PD
The idea I found most interesting was the one with constellations. I honestly love constellations, so living in a world like that would be a dream come true. Although it does make me wonder about the types of constellations we could bring back, such as Ursa Major or Minor, or Orion. (Also I just wanted to say that your art is lovely, and I apologize if I submit this more than once, the site is rather laggy as of now. Have an amazing day/night as well!)
Sara
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