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Honestly this is the best idea I have ever heard in my entire life. The one about the clouds sound like it could develop into such a great story. PLEASE MAKE THIS A MOVIE!!

Nova

WOAH the production on this is amazing :0 My favorite idea out of all of these (outstanding) ideas is the first, it's so charming! It makes me wonder how all the pages would interact with each other, especially with their placements

Cayden

WOAH. Okay, before I go into the feedback I'd just like to say I loved all the visuals. I was caught so off-guard by the animation in the beginning, I really wanted to do animation for our video but couldn't due to time restraints so I'm super glad someone else did it for us.
Anywayyyy, the idea I found that was the most interesting was the yearbook one. I can imagine it being so chaotic. Would each person have their own little compartment in the yearbook? Is it like an apartment complex? Could they decorate their own room? Would other people be able to visit other people's windows? I mean, technically that would make them absent in their own picture, but whatever! And what about the other spots in the yearbook, like how there are different pages other than just the student pictures. The teachers, the activities brought in school, the grade levels... so many different possibilities! Good work!

Dei

All of these ideas are immaculate, it's hard to choose but the 3rd stands out to me because of how relatable it is. I wonder how the style of the final product would look due to the clashing of aesthetics.

Ava

Why is the last what if me???? lol. What kind of world would the person live in??? Like is this a place were they way you dress says something about you?? Is having so many different aesthetic bad??? The year book one sounds sooo creepy. I am here for it!!! Would all the picture in the year book be alive??? OMG Imagine closing it and someones head is just hanging out. lol I love the music in the sky. One question are there people playing that music??? If so how did they get up there. AHHHH I am hooked and can't wait for more.

Larissa

I loved the idea about the yearbook, I have so many different ideas of what their personalities would be like! I wonder if the younger yearbooks would be quirkier and sillier than the older yearbooks. Would they get along together? How would they talk? Would they have different appearances? Is their one yearbook assigned to a year and they represent that year?

Nova

The first one, about the yearbook was THEE BESTT!! It would have been amazing if the yearbook really came to life. I loved what you did with the pictorial representation. It was comprehensive yet extremely simple to understand.
However, the rest of the clips could have used the some more work, for instance better visuals. Moreover the idea of teenager's aesthetic looks could have used vibrancy in the colors of the dresses..as they weren't standing out much from the background.

Beside that, the idea for all the clips were extremely unique and creative.

Btw, do leave your feedback on my submission (Ayush, Team:Jarvis) All feedback are welcomed.

Ayush

Gaahhh, I have such a hard time choosing just one of these ideas to talk about. They are all so interesting and unique. The yearbook concept is particularly intriguing to me, because if the people in the yearbook don't age, there is room to develop some very interesting commentary about youth and growth. Would the students' interpersonal relationships be static, mimicking and repeating what happened in real life, or would the yearbook personas grow into their own people over time? At the same time, the music school in the clouds has the potential to be a very visually and audibly appealing piece, with sunsets and a brilliant score. Meanwhile, the idea about a teenager's aesthetic could make for a very cute, colorful, and funny short film. It could also expand on topics like individuality, conformity, and adolescence. I can't wait to see how you develop them further.

Dylan

The idea I found most interesting was the concept of the yearbook being alive. It makes me wonder how the different sections of the yearbook would interact. Would the things within the yearbook only come to life under certain circumstances? Are the people on the ground affected by the school in the clouds and their music? I'm curious about what makes this school of music so significant? The idea of extreme struggles with trivial, daily tasks makes me curious as to how limited their patience levels are.

Olivia

Wow what a trio of handsome voices—you can feel the genius permeate through the air as you speak. Particularly that first man. What a strapping young lad. Sorry, sorry, workplace romance is a no bueno. Let me focus. So, all of the ideas are very aesthetically pleasing. For the clouds one, are ordinary people aware of these music schools? Same for the first one—are people aware that the people in each photo come to life? Or, are they only known to a select few? Is there a society that lives exclusively in the clouds? Are there diverse ecosystems native to clouds? Then, the clothes one—just how amped up and extreme of a struggle is it? Are we going to see some action-movie-esque movement and exaggerated comedy?

Nova

1. The idea that I found most interesting was the idea of teens not being able to decide between multiple aesthetics.
2. This idea makes me wonder more about how the journey of the main character will be. Will they find their aesthetic, or will they make their own aesthetic?

Kiana

The idea I found most interesting was your "what if #2." I think this was interesting because it sounds cool. It makes me wonder more about what the sky would sound like if there was actually a music school. Good job!

Kahiau

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