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Wow i really like the first one, it think that could be an awesome love story, I wonder all the adventures they could have and the character development because he's technically not supposed to love her and he's supposed to catch/hunt her. Thats would be an awesome concept to work on.
Mikayla
i love all of this ideas specially the ghost one , would the ghost hunter know about the ghost having a crush on them? and will the ghost haunt them and try to make them fall in love with them??
natalia
Major "imagine your OTP" vibes, I love it! I found the ghost-ghosthunter love story the most interesting (mostly because I'm a hopeless romantic). There's tons of potential for all kinds of things, from wacky hijinks with ghost abilities, to meet-cute moments involving spooky vacuums--it's all just very exciting, I'm super hyped to see how it grows.
Maile
My favorite idea is the good luck cat. You should add color so it mill make your artwork even more great!!
Emma
the one that was most interesting to me was what if a ghost and a ghost hunter fell in love make me wonder if the ghost hunter catches the ghost
Michael
I loved all these ideas, I really am excited to see how these turn out. The drawings are also very good and have details. One thing is just to add more background deails. Other than that I loved all of these.
Xiadani
the idea i found most interesting is if the bully and the nerd switched bodys. it makes me wonder how there friends reacted.
Kingston
the idea i found most interesting is if the bully and the nerd switched bodys. it makes me wonder how there friends reacted.
Kingston
I like the ghost one so much but is there supposed to be romance like is the ghost buster in love with the ghost too?
Farah
I love the art & the creativity for your what ifs. You took a lot of time drawing & coming up with really great story ideas. I would say some character development like, would the ghost hunter want to be in love with a ghost or how would the body swapping affect the perspectives of the nerd & jock of each other. Overall I really like your art & ideas.
Elijah
I thought your art was really well drawn. I feel like you could have added color, but it still looked great! I think you could go more into detail about your what ifs by adding more about how or why your what ifs happened. I really like the idea of a black cat that gave good luck. It made me wonder if anyone would find out the cat gave good luck. Great job!
Kaitlyn
I love all the drawings and the plots of them. Maybe expand a bit more on the second story, I really love your whole what ifs.
mia
I love all the drawings and the plots of them. Maybe expand a bit more on the second story, I really love your whole what ifs.
mia
I loved the art and I can tell it took a lot of effort, Maybe it could be better if you went more into depth about how the nerd and bully swapped bodies. Or if the Ghost and Ghost hunter falling in love was more clear about how they fell in love, These Ideas are great and will most likely lead to a amazing story.
Brandon
I loved the art and I can tell it took a lot of effort, Maybe it could be better if you went more into depth about how the nerd and bully swapped bodies. Or if the Ghost and Ghost hunter falling in love was more clear about how they fell in love, These Ideas are great and will most likely lead to a amazing story.
Brandon
I loved the art and I can tell it took a lot of effort, Maybe it could be better if you went more into depth about how the nerd and bully swapped bodies. Or if the Ghost and Ghost hunter falling in love was more clear about how they fell in love, These Ideas are great and will most likely lead to a amazing story.
Brandon
i really liked the style of art you chose. what would happen if the ghost tricks the guy. it makes me think what if the nerd stays in the other body forever. i found most interesting the ghost what if.
kailah mack
All of the ideas are great and very creative, and the idea i found most interesting was the last idea, i thought its a great idea and wonder if there personality changes over time as they get used to their new body. I also love the drawings.
Ziyad
first of all the art is amazing i love it. wish i could draw that well. i think it would be cool if it was colored but its fine without color. i wonder with the cat one how people would find out it had good luck. This is so cool. i like your team name. :D
Maddie
I think all of these are great, But the one I found most intriguing was the ghost falling in love with the ghost hunter one. I think its a really creative Idea and I like how the characters were designed. I think that you could maybe add a little bit more depth to the idea, like if ghosts were supposed to despise hunters. Or vice versa. And finally I like how original the idea is
Noah
I think all of these are great, But the one I found most intriguing was the ghost falling in love with the ghost hunter one. I think its a really creative Idea and I like how the characters were designed. I think that you could maybe add a little bit more depth to the idea, like if ghosts were supposed to despise hunters. Or vice versa. And finally I like how original the idea is
Noah
I really loved all the ideas and drawings for the what ifs. I recommend that you make the coloring of the drawings darker. I recommend that you add more pictures that would show that they switched body. I am interested on any what if that you pick.
Ashley
I really like the art style, it's clear and visually appealing. All of the ideas were unique and interesting but I found the first idea the most interesting, it makes me wonder how the story will start and develop throughout.
Frida
I love all of the ideas, I Think that You could add more ideas to the black cat one, like having the film from its POV or having only one person know and people think they are crazy, Your drawing style is amazing.
Parker
These are all very cool ideas. How would the bodies get switched? And how do they know the cat is lucky? I enjoy the artwork as well.
Sabina
These are all very cool ideas. How would the bodies get switched? And how do they know the cat is lucky? I enjoy the artwork as well.
Sabina
i liked the idea about the hunter concept and all of the concepts. i don't know how the bodys could have switched places? how did they react? also, how does the cat spread luck? I do like the concept of like, betraying the normal and doing something unusual for instance changing the scenario of common stories.
jack
The drawings were really amazing and clean and I loved your creativity. I think you can add a little bit more detail into some of the drawing. I loved your questions they were soo creative and fun and if they were a movie I would go and see in a theater
Hadarya
The presentation here is immaculate! Lovely drawings, lovely handwriting, the questions are unique! Your voice was very clear! However, it does seem like somebody did all the work of making these look good, rather than everybody putting in the effort for their own question's visual aid. Besides that, these all feel like they have potential!
Christian
The drawings were really amazing and clean and I loved your creativity. I think you can add a little bit more detail into some of the drawing. I loved your questions they were soo creative and fun and if they were a movie I would go and see in a theater
Hadarya
I really like all the topics and the art represented it really well. I wonder if you'll explore stereotypical world problems with your ideas (because that seems to be the direction you're going). Have you thought of addressing or referencing relevant events or are you making your own problems?
cindy
I can hear everything
Make the drawings more neat
add color
Its really organized
Diego
I really Like your what ifs. I found what if the bully and the neard switched boddies the most intresting.
Julieanne
I really Like your what ifs. I found what if the bully and the neard switched boddies the most intresting.
Julieanne
I really Like your what ifs. I found what if the bully and the neard switched boddies the most intresting.
Julieanne
Your guys had amazing drawings
something to improve on is to it looked like only one person was talking
and you should add some color so it could look better
awesome job
Victoria
I really Like your what ifs. I found what if the bully and the neard switched boddies the most intresting.
Julieanne
The drawings were really amazing and clean and I loved your creativity. I think you can add a little bit more detail into some of the drawing. I loved your questions they were soo creative and fun and if they were a movie I would go and see it
Hadarya
I love the first one; it is probably my favorite so far! Maybe work on adding more context later in the story? I love your art style it's really clear what you're conveying.
Sam
I think the drawings are really good, have you thought about the problem in the story? I also think the ideas are very creative.
Johnny
i believe if you added to the bully and nerd story " what if the stereotypical bully and nerd switched bodies and had live live a day in there life
i think you should add some more detail
your are super good at art keep going
Preston
The drawings and concepts were really well thought out. I think maybe you could elaborate on the ghost concept if that’s what you were to choose.
Emma
The drawings and concepts were really well thought out. I think maybe you could elaborate on the ghost concept if that’s what you were to choose.
Emma
The idea I find the most interesting was the black cat having good luck. Would someone end up befriending the cat and benefiting from it? What ends up happening to the cat? Does the cat exchange good luck by putting bad luck on itself?
Gabriel
The idea I found most interesting was "What if the nerd and the bully switched bodies?". It makes me wonder more about home they would have to change their attitude in order to fit in to the others social groups.
Braylon
I like the first idea the most. Would she ever find love in this life since not in the last? I wonder how the hunter will fall in love with her?
Brogen
I adore the ghost and ghost hunter idea, a really neat take on the opposite roles getting along dynamic :D
Cayden
All of your ideas have so much potential for a great story to happen. I love the idea of the stereotypical black equals bad luck, swapped to good. (loved the cat drawing) My one question is how do you think the cat got its good luck?
The ghost and ghost hunters is giving me the best spooky and sweet vibes and would love to see where the story goes. Is the ghost hunter in love with ghost? Or not. That could be fun, if he didn’t love her or the story was how he came to know and love her? Just and idea :)
Lastly, the body swap. Again I loved how you flipped the stereotypes over or nerd vs bully. I think the what if question would be a great way to send an underlying message of anti-bullying.
Overall I think you did awesome and I love your art too :)
Bridget
OH MY GOSH—I love your art style. And, yesss—PLAy with those stereotypes I'm all for it. Anything that messes with tropes and clichés is great in my book. The black cat one—er—actually—all of them teach important lessons like not to judge a book by its cover. Oh, by the way, for future reference if you want to go with this slideshow sort of thing on your iPad, you can screen record and make sure that your screen record is capturing audio from your microphone (press and hold the record button and it should expand to show how to enable the microphone). That way, we can see your drawings in the best quality possible whilst being as easy as possible. Okay, but, some questions. Are ghosts and ghost hunters normal within this world? Or, are they both oddities? Maybe the ghost hunter is treated as some sketchy man (in the same way most exorcists and spiritualists are treated) but he actually can see and capture ghosts? Then, for the latter, does anyone come to learn that the cat is good luck? Does anyone ignore the superstition and care for it anyways? Does anyone treat it well only after they find out it's good luck (all Rudolph style—such a backward moral story)? Finally, what causes the bully and the nerd to switch places? Do they discover things about one another that they didn't know? Maybe the nerd discovers that the bully has a bad home life? Or, maybe the bully learns how much it sucks to be bullied? Maybe he learns that the nerd's hobbies aren't so boring after all? Maybe the nerd begins to enjoy sports?
Nova
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