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My favorite what if was the backpack leading to other dimensions it has a ton of potential for some fun stories. I wonder what the rules of a world with these backpacks would be like and what these other dimensions look like.

Daud

Bug battle royale. Hilarious. I love it. Tons of comedic potential. Jus' these li'l dinky bugs dukin' it out. Backpack portal? Awwww ye. DO IT. I have the overwhelming desire to fall into a backpack now—check out CalebCity's "Its at the bottom of the bag."—no but yes—anything to do with weird pocket dimensions or portals or what have you—my favorite. And then—wow those're very cute animals. Animals attending school? Gotta love it. Are they anthropomorphized in any way? Or, are they just regular animals? 'Cuz, I do love the chaotic energy of the second, but they're both great. Anyway, what do they learn at school? Are there humans in this world? Do humans attend the same schools as them? Or, is there segregation between them? Disgoostin'. Then—back to the backpack. Haha "back to the backpack" eheh heehee—wh—sorry—I got distracted—um—what kind of other worlds does the backpack lead to? Do all backpacks lead to other worlds? Or, just this one? Are the other worlds within the bag, or does the bag act as a portal? Is there a way to leave after entering? Ending where we started—are the bugs fighting to the death? Or, is it more Nerf-kine? Why're they battling? What's the prize? Or, is there a prize?

Nova

I like the backpack portal most. Is it a two way portal? Are there people/creatures on the other side? What if they came into this world? Good Ideas!

Jennie

I really like your second & third ideas. The backpack going to other worlds makes me wonder if the backpack is an inanimate object or does it have human traits? Or are you telling the story from another character? The last idea has so much potential for humor and creativity in what school would look like for these animals and how would it change our concept of what school looks like. I wonder what would be the rules of your world. Cool ideas!

PD

I really like your second & third ideas. The backpack going to other worlds makes me wonder if the backpack is an inanimate object or does it have human traits? Or are you telling the story from another character? The last idea has so much potential for humor and creativity in what school would look like for these animals and how would it change our concept of what school looks like. I wonderful what would be the rules of your world. Cool ideas!

PD

I love the idea of a backpack leading to a different world. You could take the idea in so many different directions. It really sparks the imagination!

Lexi

I think the most interesting idea was the last idea. It made me think about how my pet might go to school or how the random animals around the place might be doing so

David

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