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I was really intrigued by the dog with x-ray vision idea. Usually the stories with x-ray vision are about people with x-ray vision, but it would be interesting to see the twists that would happen if it was a dog instead! I wonder, would the dog be very intelligent, or would it just act like a dog that has x-ray vision (maybe stealing treats that it can see hidden).
Maya
I could be intrigued by any of these stories. I wonder about the cat who could fly and are they the only one or are they a superhero cat of some sort fighting crime? A talking dog or dog with Xray vision makes me want to know why the dog has this special ability and what do they do with this power? What are the rules of your world, why and how do you plan on communicating or establishing those rules throughout your story?
PD
I liked all these ideas, and it would be really cool if they were all in a story together! Really nice drawings too.
Lexi
The idea I found most interesting was the last what if. It makes me wonder the different ways the story could go.
Frida
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