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The idea I found most interesting was the first one, because shorts about being a social outcast and not fitting in can relate to a lot of people. Also, I loveeee the art style! The way you draw clothes is very cool :0! This makes me wonder, what kind of powers does everyone have? What kind of powers does the main character have? What makes the powers different then everyone elses? Are their powers teleportation? Also, I reccoemd trying to use color to show the different between the character and their surroundings (like, making them all warm colors, but everyone else in cool colors), thats just an idea!

Cricket

There so many different ideas that could sprout out of each of these what ifs. They are all relatively simple yet hold so much to be described by imagination. I really like the last one because it could simulate a variety of messages. Could it define a social structure? Could there be new colors? How would it define us as people? Overall, really cool story ideas that are unique yet simple.

Tristan

Love the last idea. It would be super cool if our eyes could change colours based on our emotions. I wonder if it would be the same colours for each feeling for everyone or it would be different. Super intriguing.

Eli

Lovin' it. Really like the way one of the "gods" is depicted—super cool and distinct silhouette. And, the concept itself it awesome. Gods working amongst men to help resolve a war? Sick. Healthy. So good. Divine intervention is always wonderful. But a few questions. How are the gods helping to resolve the war? Are they fighting? Are they all fighting on the same side of the war? Or, is there conflict and division even amongst the gods? Then, for the eye color one, what do you imagine each color reflecting? Which emotion is tied to which color? And, are people aware of the meaning behind each emotion? 'K—ending strong, how'd the girl get teleported to the other planet? Or, who teleported her? Why? What IS her ability? How is it important to the story? Does she use her ability to return home? Does she ever return home?

Nova

My favorite idea was the second one. It made me think about how the strongest warrior throughout history could have just been him

David

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What if from 8th graders at Anna Yates Middle School

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