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I really like that Dream Crusher one because it teaches you not judge someone by their looks and if this turned into a movie it could have big potential just from the story you told about him. Its very unique!

TJ

I found your last idea most interesting, and it makes me wonder what the specific rules of that world might be.

Katie

The idea I found most interesting was Michael Penwell and his imagination world. It makes me wonder what his imagination world is like and how stressful his real life is. Does he really want to get back if it was that stressful?

Trish

Wow! All three of these ideas were unique and original, but my favorite was the Dream Crusher. The execution of this storyline could really resonate with people, and there's a lot of potential for emotionally-charged scenes and character development! Why does the Dream Crusher want to go to the human realm to make new friends? Does he not get along with the other monsters in his realm? Do they look like him? What causes the human boy to treat him with kindness? Is he an outcast that empathizes with the Dream Crusher's predicament, or is he just nice by nature? There is so much to explore here!

Dylan

Wow, I'm not sure if it's the gospel music or your luxurious voice or both but I'm feeling so inspired right now. Okay but, super good ideas! The first idea has a really good message that tackles many issues ingrained in mainstream society, and I love that it rejects traditional perspectives of beauty, appearance, and race. The second also has a good commentary about overworking and stress, and it reminds us to recall the things that made us happy. And, I mean, animal people? Anthropomorphizing is just fun. So, just a few questions. Why is the monster named Dream Crusher? Is there any meaning behind it? Does anyone apart from the boy begin to accept him? In the second idea, what is Micheal Penwell working so hard at? Is he dreaming this imagined world? Does he ever return from it? Then, the last one. Is the fact that animals can transform into humans not known by humans? How does she hide her ears? Do people ever discover her identity? Is the reaction to it better than she anticipated?

Nova

My favorite idea of yours was the first one about Dream Crusher the monster. It makes me think about the great potential of themes and overall messages that you could show in the story.

Jack

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