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Elephant astronaut??? Absolutely. Yes. You've got my vote. Elephant astronaut—yeaaah. I mean—you could not have chosen a heavier, more difficult animal to send to space (er—well—apart from a whale), but like—pff—physics—who likes physics anyways (no disrespect to all physicists and also myself since I like physics). But awww yee the idea of bringing animals to space has always been an enjoyable one. And, I mean, we've done it a number of times—with monkeys and dogs and cats and frogs and ants and jellyfish—hold up—did you know a grand total of 32 monkeys have been sent to space? Am I making that up? I don't know go look it up and learn something new. So, what do they plan to do with the elephant in space? Why did they want to send an elephant up? Or, did the elephant itself want to go? Oh my gosh—so, you know how elephants can paint, right? If not, look up Suda, the Painting Elephant and our absolute STAR—hck—love them—anyways, is our elephant gonna paint a picture of the moon and space? Aghchkgh *sobs* Okay—sorry—I've spent enough time on that for now (I haven't, but I want to get to the others)—dogs? Manning food stands? Selling food? Let's GOOO—love it. It gives me lemonade stand or car wash competitions (watch the car wash episode of Ned's Declassified: School Survival Guide season 2—actually, watch all of the episodes because that series is the greatest—also, watch 100 Things to Do Before High School—make sure you watch the pilot episode—the first episode is skippable—all the rest are just as amazing as Ned's Declassified). Basically, what I'm trying to say is it's very good—equal parts relatable yet fantastical—unique enough to warrant animation over live-action. It's also funny that they're selling mochi and peanut butter in the drawing since dogs can't eat either. But—why are they selling food? Is it their occupation? Or, do they need money? Do they learn to get along later? Or, do they unite against a third, more popular vendor? Okay, my last dude—alien Tony Hawk('s Pro Skater 2)??? Amazing. Comedy gold. It just seems fun to watch. Aliens are inherently interesting and mysterious, so pairing that with skating is just hilarious. So, did the alien come here to skate? Do other aliens arrive as well? How good are they? Do they run into any humans? Maybe they run into some miscreants at night? I'm all for it.
Nova
The idea of the first one is interesting but i wouldnt be able to tell that an astronaut and elephant switched places since theres no astronaut in the picture. Good drawing though.
The drawing of the third one is good but i couldnt really tell what he was saying. Good drawing.
Jayden
The second drawing was super detailed and I want to hear more. I think you all did an awesome job and I want to see the final products :)
Katelyn
I really like the idea of elephants swaping with the astronauts, i would love to here more about these ideas and the conspets.
Hamza
The drawing for the second one is very clear and good. I didn't really get the last one because I couldn't hear the person well. Also, you could have maybe made the first drawing a little more clear. Overall, I think all the ideas are really creative and cool.
Farah
I really like how far out some of the ideas are. For the second one, I don't quite understand exactly what the story is, so you could make your description more detailed. I like the different art styles.
sam
I like the second one are dogs the only animals that sell stuff maybe you could add a cat character who is a villain who opens a bigger shop and tries to take all their costumers so the dogs team up to beat cat
Farah
I like the second one are dogs the only animals that sell stuff maybe you could add a cat character who is a villain who opens a bigger shop and tries to take all their costumers so the dogs team up to beat cat
Farah
I really liked all of your ideas, the audio quality for the last one was hard to understand, but the art was really great for all of the what ifs.
Elijah
I really like the idea of an elephant as an astronaut. I feel like the story about the dogs could more I descriptive in the aspect of the plot. I really love the characteristics and the drawings in the in all of them.
mia
I like they story about the dogs. One detail I would fix is is that the rocket doesn't really look like rocket. Also, in the last what if I couldn't hear the person. Over all I like the creativity in this what if video.
Grace
The idea i found most Intresting was the second what if. it makes me wonder more about animals and how they get along with difrent specieas.
Julieanne
I liked the creativity for the Elephant swapping with the astronaut, It make me wonder if you could go into depth about how they swapped, Also I couldn't hear the last one so maybe make it more clear. I also liked the art for the alien one,
Brandon
I think the drawings are really good, have you thought about the problem in the story? I also think the ideas are very creative.
Johnny
I like how simple and crisp the art style is.
But, I think you should make it more detailed.
But overall, I think the story is pretty intriguing.
Curtis
i really love the color you added into your art. that’s a super great idea what if you added more animals to go to space. i can tell you took time in to your art. love how creative they are, what would happen if the dog and cat always are tied. the earth looks great.
kailah mack
the art was really colorful, which i liked. i think you could all work on speaking louder (i couldn't hear the least one), and if you can dont use lined paper to draw on it makes it hard to look at the drawing. Over all it was really cool.
Maddie
I really liked the 2nd what if about the dogs selling food. I would recommend that you should speak louder in the first and last what if because I could not hear it. I would put more lighting on the video because they are dark so it makes it hard to see. I liked all the ideas for the what ifs.
Ashley
I think that the dog vs dog idea is very cool and I like how they are in business. You could expand more on what they are competing in specifically. You could also give them a backstory or history of ancestors battling over money :). And finally, I like how you made people buying the food from dogs.
Noah
The idea I found most interesting was the one where an elephant takes the place of an astronaut and blasts off in a rocket ship/spaceship. It makes me wonder more about why an elephant would even go onto a spaceship and what would it do while in space?
Zinedine
Your drawings were really nice
you guys should just speak up a little more.
It was great but it was hard to hear
Really good job
Victoria
Nice drawings
practice more on your speaking
Make audio more clear
Diego
These drawings are fantastic! However, it feels like these don't exactly have the most potential present right now. Ask yourself, what would dogs selling food at stalls be different from humans selling stuff at food stalls? What kinds of stories could you tell with an elephant in space? And lastly, this is the only thing I think was a bit lacking in presentation, was that I couldn't make out the last what if question. Besides these issues, I feel these can be made into something greater.
Christian
i really found the elephant one interesting because what if it lands on an alien planet or gets sucked into a wormhole
i didnt find the dog one as intersting as this you could replace the dogs with any animal,this isnt a dog exclusive story
i couldnt understand the last one
connor
The idea i found most interesting was the elephant in space. How does it survive? I liked the drawings.
Emma
I like the dog idea and wonder what they would sell. I think the elephant going to space has a lot of potential and is a very good idea that could be expanded upon such as: What will the elephant think? Does he have his own huge space suit? and what would he find? The alien was also a fun idea
Hunter
I like the variety of your ideas. The dogs who have to one up each other leaves a lot of room for humor and vignettes (or little scenes) that you could insert throughout the story to add character development, humor, emotional moments, etc. How did the dogs become business rivals? Are they in it for the competition or do they dislike each other? Or do they find out that they are actually long-lost littermates or have a past history together? For your other ideas, what would happen if an elephant went into space? Or if an alien was dropped to Earth? Lots of room in those unique ideas for how that would disrupt what we consider to be normal. nice!
Pam
The idea I found most interesting was the one about the two dogs selling things. I makes me wonder about where and what they would sell and would they be competitors.
Finnley
The idea I found most interesting was the two dogs competing for the highest sales. It makes me wonder more about how the dogs communicate (do they talk?). I also am wondering what their sales pitch is.
Emily
The idea I found most interesting was the one about the alien and the skate park. It makes me wonder more about how aliens would interact with humans if they came to Earth.
Braylon
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