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Oh! Very interesting. Since bees help with a whole bunch of stuff (e.g. pollination, honey production, etc), the idea of them never existing in the first place immediately sparks the imagination—exactly the thing a good what if should do. Like, without pollination and cross-pollination through bees, how have plants evolved and reproduced? Have other pollinators taken bees' place? Have humans had to pollinate things by hand, like in Hanyuan, China, where the bee population has been destroyed? Do the plants of the present look different? Have they evolved to be more mobile now that bees aren't doing a bunch of the work for them? Or, are the other bugs and the wind good enough? Next—one task life. Super good commentary on industrialism and corporations. Go watch "Beat" by Bar-El on YouTube. So, what's the one thing that people are allowed to do? Or, is every person allowed to do a different thing? How do they get their food? Are they being monitored? What happens if they stop or try to do something else? Third—I recommend you consult a history textbook. Has every race been gathered onto certain parts of continents? Or, are cities broken into districts by race? Are they being separated by humans? Or, is this the work of some outer force? Are they separated due to hate and contention? Or, is there another reason? Have the races never intermingled? If they have, what about people of mixed heritage? How is race determined? By appearance? Or, do they take the blood quantum (auē!)? Finishing up—eternal drought—hoo-boy. Sounds like a biblical thing. It's the exact opposite of PBS Eons' "That Time It Rained for Two Million Years" on YouTube. But yes—super fun and dystopian. What causes it to stop raining? Are there no clouds? What about the oceans? Have they dried up? Or, have they never existed from the beginning? How are humans surviving? What about plant life? Is there any ecosystem on this barren planet?
Nova
Oh! Very interesting. Since bees help with a whole bunch of stuff (e.g. pollination, honey production, etc), the idea of them never existing in the first place immediately sparks the imagination—exactly the thing a good what if should do. Like, without pollination and cross-pollination through bees, how have plants evolved and reproduced? Have other pollinators taken bees' place? Have humans had to pollinate things by hand, like in Hanyuan, China, where the bee population has been destroyed? Do the plants of the present look different? Have they evolved to be more mobile now that bees aren't doing a bunch of the work for them? Or, are the other bugs and the wind good enough? Next—one task life. Super good commentary on industrialism and corporations. Go watch "Beat" by Bar-El on YouTube. So, what's the one thing that people are allowed to do? Or, is every person allowed to do a different thing? How do they get their food? Are they being monitored? What happens if they stop or try to do something else? Third—I recommend you consult a history textbook. Has every race been gathered onto certain parts of continents? Or, are cities broken into districts by race? Are they being separated by humans? Or, is this the work of some outer force? Are they separated due to hate and contention? Or, is there another reason? Have the races never intermingled? If they have, what about people of mixed heritage? How is race determined? By appearance? Or, do they take the blood quantum (auē!)? Finishing up—eternal drought—hoo-boy. Sounds like a biblical thing. It's the exact opposite of PBS Eons' "That Time It Rained for Two Million Years" on YouTube. But yes—super fun and dystopian. What causes it to stop raining? Are there no clouds? What about the oceans? Have they dried up? Or, have they never existed from the beginning? How are humans surviving? What about plant life? Is there any ecosystem on this barren planet?
Nova
we like the race one maybe add something really emotional to it to make it better and more interesting
Kaelyn
All ideas are great. all of these can invoke an emotion.
Robbie
The idea of it never raining is interesting! Has it always been this way? Is there still life on earth? Cool idea!
Lexi
I'm most interested in this idea where we get to do one thing for our whole life...i wonder what that would be, and how would people deal with it? can't wait to see what you do next
Brit
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