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Oh my gosh—that painting monster is absolute nightmare fuel—congratulations. And, that's a super fun idea—it reminds me of an episode of Infinity Train... I could tell you which... but—just go watch it all. Then—I love the idea of everyone speaking a different language—it's just so fun—and, there're very obvious tie-ins to individuality. And, the first idea—I mean—ccccccommeee onnnnnn—we all want to know the meaning of life—we've all thought about it before—your demographic is huge. And, your demographic is also very curious. What's the meaning of life? Does the audience know? Or, does the story not explain that? Does the story only focus on how people would act if they did know the meaning of life? How different society would be? Back to the language one—do they have any other way to communicate? Sign language? Body language? Has this influenced the speed of human advancement? Finally, painting monsters—are there a great deal of them? Are they well-known? Is there a way to defeat them? Or, do they need defeating? Perhaps they're kind monsters??? *Crossing fingers intensifies* ( ̄▽ ̄;;;)
Nova
Great ideas. I wonder if we knew the meaning of life, if we would change the way we live? Or how would it benefit or hinder us? Your last idea of us being born from famous paintings is really unique and makes me want to know more: who originally painted us? do we still have families? do we frozen at that age or do we get to age out the remaining years? does everything else in the world need to be painted in order to exist? so cool!
PD
I like the idea of humans knowing the meaning of life. Maybe they just think they know and they find the true reason throughout the story. Really cool ideas.
Lexi
Nice work, I love the idea of people who don't speak the same language! it makes me wonder how they would find a shared way to understand each other...i think that would make an awesome story...can't wait to see more
Brit
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