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i really like the conecpt and what would happen if humans were superhumans with really strong powers
antonio
Oh, DNA dude—go watch Veritasium's "Catching Criminals Using Their Relative's DNA" (formerly "Your DNA is Already in a Database"). 'K—toodles~!
Nova
Hmmmmm—I'm not gonna lie that's ppRETTY sus. Not sure if we've got the rights to Among Us. Lit. Spooky Mc. Spookerston's got a diet of children. Okay. Cool. Mhm. Very dark—I can vibe with it. As terrible as I am with horror and jumpscares—I love thinking and reading about it. There's something so visceral about it. Anyway, why does it need to feed on children to stay alive? Would adults not work? Or, maybe they would but would be less life-lengthening? Does the gained life come from the fact that children have spent very little of theirs? Why does the being want to stay alive so much? Does it have a hobby? Does it have a desire? Does it have friends? People will find that immortality often makes for very rotten company. Can the being be defeated? Repelled? Does it only come out at night? You said that it's immortal, but is it able to be slain? Do people know about it? What do they do to prepare against it? Then, next—animal wings? Love it. Very aesthetic. Very cute. Very pretty. I'm all for it. From your drawing I assume you count bugs as animals, too? What about flying fish? Do you count their wings? And, flying squirrels? What do they do with their wings? I imagine their wings are much larger than their animal counterparts? Do their wings ignore physics to allow them to fly (y'know, so they don't have to have hollow bones and defecate constantly)? Or, are their wings purely ornamental? Are they goin' for the whole peacock dazzle dazzle mating dance purpose? What about the wings of flightless birds? Like penguin wings and ostrich wings and chicken wings (sike—psych? Psyche? Psyche—I ain't no fool—chickens aren't flightless birds—HAH—no sir-y—they just can't fly far gOTT'EM)? Oh, are the wings allocated based on biological gender? Like, do men get the decorative peacock wings and women the more plain ones? How are clothes designed to compensate for the additional appendage (I'm assuming the bird wings aren't merged with the arms based on the drawings)? Do the ones capable of long-distance flight, like albatrosses, still use airplanes? Oh GOSh what about the hummingbird humans? Do they suffer the same plight? Do they have to always fly? Are they suffering from the constant need to find food? AMOGUS—gosh no—um—what kind of tasks are we talking? Are the tasks just the jobs that we already do? Are imposters hunted for all witch-trial style? Are the imposters aliens? Would it be accurate to say this is more or less just Earth but with aliens among us?—gosh I didn't even mean to say the game title again and there it is. M'k final one—got a bit cut-off—but robots collecting human DNA, right? Super cool. Anything that messes with DNA is great. But, um, do they really need robots to do so? Or, like are they humanoid robots? Because there's DNA literally EVERYWHERE—so specialized, non-humanoid robots would be far better. Humans are sort of designed to be all-round—we're not particularly good at a lot of stuff, but we can still do them. But, like, sorry this is just the curse of knowledge—I'm totally with you if you want to use humanoid robots 'cuz that's just sick and aesthetic. Not everything has to have a reason. Okay, and then, what are they searching for DNA for? Is there really a need for this to be so secretive? Who's funding this? The government?
Nova
Why hello there team ----, these ideas are very dandy. In the future it would be lovely for you to expand on the ideas a little bit more cause they are a little vague. But overall these ideas are outstanding, keep up the acceptable work!
Elle
I'm drawn to your two creepy ideas. Robots collecting human DNA, for a sinister or good purpose? what is it used for? who is behind this operation and what are they hoping to achieve? Or the supernatural being eating children is darn scary. Why do they need to eat children? Do those victims go on to become supernatural beings themselves or do they parish is this horrified way? How will people stop this from happening? Is there another food source they introduce and where do these scary creatures come from?
PD
The idea I found the most interesting was what if humans had animal wings. it makes me wonder more about would it be just a select portion of the population to receive them? What is the process to receive your animal wings? Would they be chosen by the receiver or handed down to them through the family? What would these people do with the gift of flight? What connection would they have with the original animal they received their wings from?
DG
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