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the last one is kind of captain America! i like the second idea, I think that would be a cool concept to work one, I could see a lot of character development in that idea.
Mikayla
'Ay litty. The drawing for that first idea is hilarious—love the whole "first hand-written issue" thing—and yeah—I've already mentioned it so someone who had a similar idea, but because we've become so reliant on technology, technology being rendered dysfunctional is now considered up there with all of the other apocalyptic scenarios, so it's definitely an idea people would find interesting. But, so, you've sort of already explained the media's response (though, I'm curious—are their newspapers actually written by hand, or are they printed with a printing press?), but what about the government? And, moreover, what of the people? Have they been able to adapt? Since it isn't a total ground zero—since only electronics have been destroyed, how are we handling things? Are the effects of the E.M.P. permanent (i.e. have they established some sort of continual electric interference), or are they temporary? Second, nice idea! Messing with game mechanics is always welcome. Do you respawn as a baby? Like with reincarnation? Or, return as a certain age? The same age as when you died? Does it vary? Do you just poof out of midair when you respawn? Or, is it that you spirit has possessed someone else's body? Then—limited lifespan scenarios are always cool—why do we have 10 days to live? Is there some sort of doomsday event? Is some group working to put everyone to death? I see that you've written the date 12/21/2030 in roman numerals—is there some significance to this date? Is this the day of reckoning? Is it the current day? Last, but most certainly not least—the time traveler frozen in time. Sick. The whole idea that things can be frozen and brought back to life later is in and of itself a form of time travel, so the fact that you're combining it with literal time travel is awesome. Does the man get brought back to life? How did he time-travel (gosh, I do not like the weird hyphenation rules for the word time travel)? Is the device he used to do so still with him? Is his discovery disclosed to the public? Since he's apparently from the modern day, is his present-day counterpart located?
Nova
Hi I like you creative and drawings and one thing that was so interesting was what if we had 10 days to live. what makes me wonder about is if all the people in the world and then new people come the the earth and still have 10 days to live .
Jocelyn
Hi I like you creative and drawings and one thing that was so interesting was what if we had 10 days to live. what makes me wonder about is if all the people in the world and then new people come the the earth and still have 10 days to live .
Jocelyn
So many rich ideas to develop further. I'm curious about the time traveler and whose perspective you would tell your story from? Where is this frozen person from and why did they end up in this time period? What set of consequences does that put into action? And the 10 days left to live really sets up the stakes in your world. What does this mean for society? Do some people know and others don't? How does that change how people behave, do all rules go out the window? So curious where you could take any of these ideas.
PD
I'm most interested in the time traveler in ice who looks like they are from modern day. wow that was hard to pick as all your ideas could be in a story, maybe you can try and blend 2 of them? it makes me wonder how that time traveler got there and if their machine would still work when the ice melted
brit
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