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Sweet :D Your last idea got me hooked the most, it makes me wonder what activities they'd do as a witch queen :0
Cayden
I think the last one is quite fitting for the time of the year and I'd love to see it fleshed out more. I wonder what kind of world you wish to build through the portal.
Ava
Such rich ideas. I am really drawn to the first idea, mostly because it is even more important in today's times to connect with one another face-to-face and not through devices. I would be very interested to know more about the first or third idea, and the worlds you are going to create around those ideas. Great, clear illustrations too.
Pam
So FUN. Lotsa good potential commentary in the first and second one, and the last one—well, I just like the last one. Adorable! Super cute! Appeals to my aesthetics a lot. Just excellent. Only, I'm curious to know how exactly she becomes the queen of a witch kingdom. If it were a candy kingdom of sorts, I feel like there'd be enough whimsy for her to become queen for no particular reason other than being a human, but I'm interested to know how she earns such a high position in a nation of witches.
Nova
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