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What if four people controlled the four elements? I personally enjoy the thought of that idea. Do they rule the world with an iron fist or do they stay behind the curtain or in the shadows? Have they been around since the creation of the world? What do they do for entertainment? Are the massive fires, earthquakes, monsoons and tornados controlled by them or are they just results of one of them having a temper-tantrum? Overall I like this idea because I can see conflict happening between them struggling to see who the most powerful out of the four of them is.
Lucas
I really loved all of your ides they all had a very clear theme and it came across really well . I had a hard time at first understanding who the girl in the picture was with the reptile and what role she was playing so maybe make the magic in her had stand out more so your eye can come right to it , The drawings were clear and it really showed and gave me a really good representation of your what if .
Hadarya
1. the idea I found most interesting was what if four people became responsible for the elements
2. it made me wonder what kind of responsibilities they would have and what they would do with their power.
Bella
Verrry fun. Elemental abilities and safeguarding of nature are both always enjoyable. A "put yourself in their shoes" scenario but with reptiles? Nice. A comedy poking fun at musicals? Love it. I haven't watched it, but it reminds me of "The Guy Who Didn't Like Musicals". Anyhoo, how do the people gain responsibility and jurisdiction over their respective elements. Are the elements based on the periodic table or are they based on the simplified Avatar-style collection? Or, are they closer to the elements within RPGs? Or, RWBY, maybe? Magical girl anime like Pre-Cure? Lilpri? (Not sure if those last two really have elements per se but I had a heartfelt obligation to mention them) As for the second what if, why did you specifically choose reptiles? Why does he become a reptile? Or, who turn him into one? What does he learn during his experience as a reptile? Is he able to communicate with fellow reptiles? Finally, why doesn't the girl like singing or dancing? Does it stem from social anxiety? Her past? Does she learn to enjoy singing or dancing? Or, do others learn to respect her decision not to sing or dance? Is everyone aware that they break out in song and dance?
Nova
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