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I thought your ideas were very interesting. I think you could expand on some of the ideas more. What does the kid do with the key? Does using the key on someone's mind show you their thoughts? Why doesn't the piano want to play classical music any more? I think you did a good job overall.

Kaitlyn

I really appreciate that you added so much detail on the first one and made an elaborate idea. I think the second one was so create but I would I have liked to hear a little more about the end result on all of these.

Katelyn

really good drawing i really liked the concept at the beggining why was there a piano what does it do and why is it involved in your drawing and what does it do

antonio

it was good

kiernan

the idea i loved most was the last one and the first one keep up the good work

Brian

The piano idea is great! Does the piano have a favorite type of music?

Clara

The piano idea is great! Does the piano have a favorite type of music?

Clara

The piano idea is great! Does the piano have a favorite type of music?

Clara

The idea I found most interesting was the key that unlocks everything inside the person because with all this information unlocked about one person and maybe many more people, I wonder what the person that has control of the key would do with this information, and keep it locked away to do their own "research" or expose it for witchcraft, etc.

Paris

Might I say, epic? Because, this is quite epic indeed. Post-apocalyptic world? Epic. How much time do you imagine would have to have passed for the humans to evolve to breathe underwater? Moreover, what happened to the machines during that time? The second one, the one about the key, sent me for a loop—how does the key work? Like, not scientifically, but how does it work conceptually? Do you have to physically twist the key? Does a keyhole open in space whenever you move the key to unlock something? And, what does "unlocking" entail in regards to the mind? Does this release mental barriers? Does it give them access to all the information in the world? Does this open the door to Kingdom Hearts? The door is not yet open—anyhow, as for the last one—no questions needed. You had me at "epic classical music"—sentient, self-playing instruments are just—well—epic.

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